“Cutting Straight”- A Commemorative Poem

Part of the Hidden Bonds Series: a commemorative poem for the carpenter who fell from a scaffold, saw double for fifty years, and kept cutting straight.

 

Cutting Straight

for Miles Murtha O'Brien (1904–1984)

He lost his mother at two,

learned early that love leaves

but its shape remains—

a space you build around.

He fell from a scaffold

and saw two of everything after:

two nails, two boards,

two of his wife's beautiful face.

But a carpenter learns

to cut straight anyway—

to trust the hand

when the eye betrays.

He worked alone

for fifty years.

Built kitchens. Built offices.

Built a family of six,

then nineteen,

then more.

The grandchildren thought

he was gruff.

They didn't know

about the candy in his pocket,

the tenderness he couldn't say.

At Woodruff Jewelers

they saw overalls.

He saw what he could afford.

He plunked down cash

and told the story for years.

Fifty-six years married.

One wife. One home.

One saw that cut the birthday cake

because he was, in the end,

exactly himself:

practical, irreverent, true.

He saw double.

He cut straight.

He built what lasted.

Hidden Bonds: The O'Brien Family of Jamaica, Queens

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This poem was created as part of our Legacy Keepsakes service — commemorative pieces that transform genealogical research into family heirlooms.

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